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SECTION 1 Litkids: What do you look for in a book? SECTION 2 SECTION 3 SECTION 4 Litkids: Writing Newspaper reports Useful links for creative writing.
Ursula Le Guin discusses plot and narrative.
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The Eltham North Primary Ghost Story Winner: Jessica K!
Vickie peered up at the Tower of London. It was a cloudy day and the sky was grey. The rain was spitting in her face. The Tower looked tall and spooky from where she stood. In a way, she wished she could just run through the doors. In another she felt like running away. Finally she decided to go in.
As soon as she walked in it felt like she shouldn't be there. She was just about to turn around and leave when the door closed. She felt something cold run through her.
She stood there for a minute, looking around, wondering if anyone was there. After a while of listening she heard another door close and a boy's voice said, "You can't get in!" She heard metal clatter and then sobbing.
When she realised that all this noise was coming from upstairs she decided that she should go and help the sad person. She walked up the stairs and looked around. It was gloomy and silent, but it was clean as if someone had just washed every corner of the room. She heard the clatter of the metal and then a loud laugh that echoed down the hall. Suddenly the hall looked spookier, for all the torches lining the hall magically lit.
Well at least I can see now, Vickie thought, tryingto make things better. But it was true. Now she could see that this was a sort of royal Castle or something. There were paintings all over the walls and beautiful marks on the ceiling. She nearly forgot that anything weird was happening until she heard the crying. "Why does he have to stay here?" said the voice, "I do not know," said the other.
She kept walking and walking for what felt like ten minutes until she came to the front of the door that the sobbing was behind. Now she really thought that she shouldn't be there. She decided that instead of just barging in she should knock on the door, but this was harder then she thought. In the end she had to; she counted to three and then knocked on the door twice, very fast. "I told you, you can't get in!" said the voice.
"I'm… I'm… Um… Vickie. Who..." she said softer then she thought she would. The door opened and she went in.
When she got inside she couldn't see anything or anyone. The door, yet again, closed shut behind her, but this time she heard lots of locks clicking shut. Then out of nowhere two boys appeared. They wore what looked like royal clothing, covered in blood. There were cuts all over their faces and all over their beds. Vickie did notice all of this but the thing that caught her eye the most was that she could see through them and they were hovering in midair. She gasped. They were ghosts. "Who are you?" she asked.
"I am Edward," said the older one, "And this is my younger brother, Richard. And… er you're Vickie?"
"Yes," said Vickie, "Um, I was wondering if you could tell me exactly who you are?"
"Well, one day in the 15 th century,Henry VII decided to come to our tower. Then that night he came into our room, and well……………. -"
"Smothered you to death," said Vickie in a strong voice that was nothing like her own. After waiting in silence for at least a minute Vickie asked another question, "So why are you locked up in here?"
"Well, after Henry died he came here to be with us to make sure that we stayed put," said Edward. For the first time she heard Richard speak, "Not like we would go out. We're ghosts." "Well we could make a plan to keep him somewhere to stop him from watching over you," Vickie suggested.
"Hey, Richard," said Edward, "Do you still know where that trap-door is?" "So in the end you can lock him in and you will be safe," Vickie finished.
"Great. Lets start now!" said Edward. First Vickie went out into the hall and walked until she came to a passage that ended with a door. She opened the door and there was a man inside just as she had been told. "Hey," she said. The man turned around. He looked perfectly normal. There was no blood on him at all.
"What do you want?" he said in a grumpy voice. He had obviously had people disturb him before.
"Well I have found a hiding place you might like. If you want to use it come with me," Vickie said, as she started to walk up the stairs, Henry following her.
When she got to the top of the stairs she started to walk down the hall. "You don't get scared easily, right?" said Henry. "I don't think so," said Vickie. When they got to the trap door, Henry climbed in. She quickly shut the door and Edward and Richard locked it.
After that day Edward and Richard were free to roam around the castle and Vickie always visited them. The thing that they loved though was Henry saying "Who was that girl?"
Known in history as the Princes in the Tower, the two young sons of Edward IV mysteriously disappeared in the Tower of London. Thought to be murdered by their uncle Richard III, Henry VII, who became King after his battlefield victory against Richard, is also considered a suspect. Wendy thinks it was the Duke of Buckingham who did the deed.
The Tudor Ghost Story Contest - for Eltham North!Once upon a time, for five years of my life, I used to write a bi-monthly Tudor England column at Suite101.com. That column and its readers gained a special place in my heart, but all good things must come to an end. Moving on, I hoped to take one thing with me: my Tudor Ghost Story writing contest, which offered a writing platform for new writers. If you read the following stories, you can see why I am so keen to get the contest happening once more: The Visitation by Fred Pachter won first place the first year of the contest - a beautifully written piece about Barnaby Fitzpatrick, one of the dearest friends of Edward VI. I won't tell you who is the ghost in the story! The second place getter, The Maid's Tale, was also a great story, based on a true incident in the life of Dr. John Dee. The 2001 contest winner Alesha Polles wrote a story about the young Elizabeth and a meeting with her mother Anne Boleyn in Always One. Alesha Polles also won the contest in 2002 with As the Sun Sets another story about Elizabeth. The winner of the 2000 contest came in second with a wonderful Tudor Ghost poem. The 2003 contest received great stories from all over the Globe, which resulted in Frozen Ghost by Sabine Naus taking the prize that year, with An Afterlife at Hampton Court by Heather Gustavsson coming in second.In 2004, the very generous Elizabeth Chadwick, an author described by Historical Novel Society as "the best writer of medieval fiction currently around," judged the Tudor England contest. She awarded first place to: Past Design by Joann Bolner-Thomas, second place to: The Ice Ghost of Willoughby Lake by Julie Atwood and third place to: It isn't fair! I won't be king! by David Morrow.A Question of When: won the 2005 Tudor Ghost Story Contest - judged by Christopher Willis (C.W.) Gortner, author of The Secret Lion, described by Historical Novel Society as "capturing the very essence of Tudor glamour and depravity. Honourable mentions also went to S.K. Naus' Out of the Fog and Alesha Polles' A Message from God. The Tudor Ghost Story Contest is on for students at Eltham North! Entered stories need to be at least 500 words and no more than 3000 words. All stories must involve a Tudor Ghost(s) or Tudor characters. Publication will be at The History Bookshop, as well as on my web home at www.wendyjdunn.com. ! This year's judge is Sandra Worth - award winning historical writer.The contest will close on December 1, 2008 and the winning stories published in time for Christmas. Please free to contact me (Wendy J Dunn at wjeandunn@yahoo.com.au for further information.Send your Tudor Ghost Story entry to wendydspace-historybooks@yahoo.com.au or give it to me via your flash drive at school!
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Below all of this, the lake, and in the lake, a perfect reflection of the heights above. Here, even in the intangible mirror, you can see your hero, scaling the depths of the reflection -- the echo of the outer world. Here below, in perfect symmetry to the tangible plot above, is the hero’s inner journey. The story. Here is where we find our premise. Screenwriting: The Dual Landscape of Plot and Story by Robin Catesby
I feel art in my hair, I wonder about the world of art, I wish to fly in the sky, I hear voices of art, I see art, I am an art piece.
I touch the paint I feel, I worry that I will get taken off the wall, I understand that people have their own world of art, I pretend I am a swan, I cry that people don't have imagination, I am an art piece. I want people to gaze and use their creative side, I try to find a bright side to life, I say to life we can have a creative side, I dream of dancing on clouds, I am an art piece. Anon ENPS student.
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